Critique reflection

I feel that the camera movements and shot angles were on point and matched the movies shots and the dialogue was clear and loud through mostly the whole film.

Classmates said that the camera shots were good and the costume were close to the film. The dialogue was clear, and the lighting and contrast was good as well.

I need to work on taking background sounds out of my film and get better and clearer dialogue. Wearing better costumes to match the film as well.

I plan on to improve my dialogue shots and get better camera movement shots.


I don’t have many strengths but the contrast in some shots were great and brought out the character in it and adding sounds to the clip so it matches the actual film clip.

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